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rodltg2
05-29-2007, 08:05 PM
i just got this back from the producer i had a commercial made to advertise my new store . what do yuo guys think..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zNQOWqpgOl4

sanjuan23
05-29-2007, 08:09 PM
Looks pretty good showing off your custom installations and to the point.

pq2
05-29-2007, 08:12 PM
Congrats Rod. looks pretty good

Sodar
05-29-2007, 08:13 PM
Looks Good Rod!! Funny though how all those interior finish commercials (stone, cabinents, flooring, etc.) all look and sound the same! You would think that one guy patented the format of the commercial!!

pram
05-29-2007, 08:20 PM
That looks great.

LakePirate
05-29-2007, 08:55 PM
I think you should have had UMP do the voice over, dontchano.

Upper Michigan Prostar190
05-29-2007, 10:18 PM
I think you should have had UMP do the voice over, dontchano.
Yea, Lake is right, the voice over is far too normal. I could have done it in Yoopanese. it would be an attention getter in CA. Try something like this in Yooper lingo: ( I will type it how its pronounced here)

"Hey dere, Yoos cuys should come down to Cassarino stone an' see all ta nice stuff we got here, eh? we gots all kines of kitsen counters, tiles, cuttin' boards for da deer, an even stuff for da sitter! all our stuff is top grade, eh? an you can count on dat, cus its installed by us, Cassarino stone, da professionals wit rocks." :)

See how that flows better? the pure curiosity factor is bound to drive plenty of customers in to see if the voice on the TV is there in person. (No Rod, I dont do personal appearances or autograph sessions, sorry.) then you can sell them some stone!:D

LakePirate
05-29-2007, 10:25 PM
da deer and da sitter.

Upper Michigan Prostar190
05-29-2007, 10:36 PM
da deer and da sitter.
ya! da deer and da sitter! Ya know!!! da deers in da woods and you know, da sitter dats in da woods:rolleyes: whats da big deel? what? do I hav to esplain every-ting to you sunama-Pitches??

;)

fintek9
05-29-2007, 10:58 PM
yos got me sold on dat UMP...yos got ta haav ta hard stone ta cut da deer up fer shur.. a must in da kitsen eh..

anywho, it looks very good Rod, nice job... eh..

6ballsisall
05-29-2007, 11:41 PM
Pretty nice job Rod. I'd recommend you find a way to track the leads you get from this TV purchase. There are various ways, but I wouldn't leave that up to having your internal staff ask what prompted the customer to call, visit the store/site etc.....

rodltg2
05-29-2007, 11:57 PM
it will be fairly easy to track since we only have one sales person in our showroom in chico./

LakePirate
05-30-2007, 12:52 AM
Rod

Call your telephone service provider and they can set you up with what we at BellSouth call Ring Master service. It is an additional number that rings on the same lines that you currently have and is a great way of tracking advertising dollars. You advertise the number and all of the calls that come to that number can be given to you by the phone company.

east tx skier
05-30-2007, 12:55 AM
Made me want to put granite in the kitchen.

Hemey5
05-30-2007, 09:30 AM
Coming from a marketing backgroung, your producer did a great job.
I'm ready to buy that outdoor patio grill set-up that was shown.

Very Nice!

Hemey

Upper Michigan Prostar190
05-30-2007, 09:42 AM
Made me want to put granite in the kitchen.
OK, Leo Getz. :)

Upper Michigan Prostar190
05-30-2007, 09:44 AM
yos got me sold on dat UMP...yos got ta haav ta hard stone ta cut da deer up fer shur.. a must in da kitsen eh..

anywho, it looks very good Rod, nice job... eh..
Ya, Nice Job Rod. :)

chudson
05-30-2007, 11:37 AM
Got a great idea for the end of your commercial when you do a new one. Say that you sell the the most discerning customers and then have the Fred Flintstones "Yabba Dabba Doo" go off in the backround!!! Course Fred is a granite expert workin at the quary and all!!!

http://www.topthat.net/webrock/sounds/fred-f.wav

Great commercial by the way!!!

rodltg2
05-30-2007, 11:44 AM
thnaks for all the great comments guys, hopefully this commercial brings me lots of business and i can upgrade to the red tt i want !

east tx skier
05-30-2007, 11:48 AM
OK, Leo Getz. :)

Took me a second, but GOOD ONE UMP!

KnoxX2
05-30-2007, 11:59 AM
Hay Rod Chico is a great area. Big College town!! I lived in Redding for about 4yrs and went to Chico for meetings with work.

Great Commercial!